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Does this seems good for a 404 page?

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    Perhaps it can be a 500 page either, I don't know, that's the first joke I got on mind
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    Welcome to devRant!
    @JeDaYoshi
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    I don't want to be THAT GUY, but I think if the grammatical errors aren't part of the joke, cleaning those up might have a bit more cheeky tone. Professional, yet taking the piss. Kind of like an Onion thing.
  • 0
    come on...
  • 9
    @runfrodorun Fuckin' A
  • 9
    The errors are quite bad but it could be part of your joke, don't know.

    However, the last sentence is really bad, you should find something better to say.
  • 12
    Please fix the An to A
  • 0
    @mzpro10 Isn't it 'an' when the following word starts with a,e,i,o or u?
  • 13
    @ChibangLW Generally, but as it's based on pronunciation there are exceptions to the rule. Notable example: "an" doesn't work with long "u" sounds such as in "universe," "uniform," "urinary," "unicorn," etc.
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    @Ashkin Thanks for clarification.
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    Nice idea, nice artwork!

    For the English errors:
    The word 'slain', is in past tense. You probably meant: come back when a unicorn hasn't slain you. Or when a unicorn doens't slay you.

    When you put some form of "to do" in your sentence, you use the present version of the verb.
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    U has exceptions. For example you say A Uniform or A University... But you don't say A upper-class, it's an upper-class @ChibangLW
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    This is really awesome for a 404 page
  • 2
    spelling mistakes always look professional
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    great :D
  • 4
    Needs more English. πŸ˜›
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    @mzpro10 @ronakkaria CAME HERE ONLY FOR THIS
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    @Almost thanks! lol
  • 0
    Thanks everyone for your suggestions. Okay, the "An unicorn" spelling error was a little mistake… and yeah, I knew the last sentence would be better. I'll do some changes to it!
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    Wow! Such a big unicorn dick.
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    404 - A unicorn
    A unicorn has slain the page.
    But how? Neither exist.

    Find a page without unicorns:
    ____________________πŸ”
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    @runfrodorun well… perhaps
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    @JeDaYoshi Do not change a God damn thing! It's genius. Including that last line. Removing that might make people think the 'An' was not deliberate.
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    One important thing we haven't discussed, what does this website do?

    Is it just for you or your techie friends?

    If it's for the general public then you have to provide good information and offer a way out.
  • 0
    @nickpapoutsis it's just a 404 page for my website (WIP), I might actually provide a back link but yeah, did that to have a little joke
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    @nickpapoutsis it might be public, also, but yeah
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    Love it! Good work
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    Your grammar and wording needs real work. I suggest you rewrite the whole thing. The idea is great though.
  • 0
    Poor users can't do things like this on us for a 500 error
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    @thejohnhoffer ....awesome sauce πŸ˜‚
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    Very creative, that is awesome
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    @nickpapoutsis final sentence is awesome!
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