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No matter how much trickery is added
No matter how many distractions
In the end if even one person deviates
They may as well be punished
Because they likely did or enabled something wrong by trying to cause a check that distracted someone important
And a person who is caught cannot be helped by their fellows right away if at all because it associates them with the crime
Imagine the horror of one of us fully enabled catching one of them doing something horrible
The loud scream of fury the last thing they heard before the icy feeling of metal entering their body is experienced and noone could help them
Outside very specific times and places the best that could be accomplished is a temporary suspension of punishment
Eventually because of how convoluted things have become punishment will be effect

Now I want to smile
And act appropriately
Because I need to
I'm so happy
And I can't believe this is happening to me

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    You should seriously consider writing an actual book about all that. The way you leave out the most essential context makes your writings pretty surreal - but it also really sells the pure protagonist perspective. By now, i am pretty sure i would watch the movie even though it is unlikely that i get the plot.
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    @AvatarOfKaine Hey, maybe it sells good. Who knows. Kafka only got famous after his death, but it doesn't have to be that way.
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