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Hey y'all..😁
just launched my blogging site with my college mates.

Show me some support by giving any feedback if you have on this article.

https://readosapien.com/what-is-a-w...

Thanks

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    I had trouble understanding the first paragraph, so I stopped reading.

    Hopefully someone else can make sense of it and offer more constructive feedback.
  • 2
    @AmyShackles I mirror that, I can barely make sense of what's written here.

    I'd suggest paying a native speaker t edit the articles because it's almost incomprehensible
  • 0
    Gotta proofread your work, get your prepositions right , grammar people , grammar
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